-Green house gases released from fossil fuels are polluting the air
-People need clean air in order to survive
=In order for the human race to survive it must stop using Fossil fuels.
-Hydrogen Fueled cars release exhaust in the form of water vapors
-Water vapor helps purify the air
=Hydrogen fueled cars will help purify the air
Most people from our generation are aware that one of the biggest threats to the environment are green house gases. The most common source of green house gas is released from fossil fuels such as oil and petroleum. Because the United States and many other industrialized countries are so dependent on oil to fuel their factories, cars, and economies: the amount of green house gases released into the environment is growing each year. The human race needs clear air in order to survive; therefore, we as a people we must stop our heavy consumption of fossil fuels in order to survive. The answer to how people can stop the use of fossil fuels is simple: Hydrogen! Hydrogen fueled cars release exhaust in the form of water vapor. As we all know, water vapor helps purify the air. Hydrogen fueled cars will help purify the air and help stop the destruction caused by fossil fuel.
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3 comments:
You had really good syllogisms and used the correct tense and voice
ryan,
well passive voice could be better in one sentence. Try this instead of what you have: "Fossil fuels such as oil and petroleum release the most amount of greenhouse gases"..
one more thing, try to simplify your first syllogism, because it's just too wordy and needs simplification.
great job though!
i liked the way you used syllogisms to force the reader to believe more than they normally would. You did well on passive voice too.
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