Winter semester has begun, and so has all the work and stress that comes along with it. In order to stay healthy and be able to cope with all the stress of school it is important to exercise. With the cold weather I would prefer to work out inside, as opposed to freezing outside. There is one problem with my way of thinking; there are thousands of students at BYU who are thinking the same thing. The only gym available to non-student athletes is the gym in the Smith Field House that only has a capacity of 92 persons. Once someone is finally able to enter the gym, he or she finds that the gym is so small that there is no room to work out. The gym in the Smith Field House needs improvement to accommodate the needs of the students at BYU.
Titles
Thinking of Working Out?: Think Again
Caution--Falling Weights in Gym
3 comments:
I love your title it is to the point and it is a great play on words. I like how you established your ethos by describing what it is like to work out at the gym on campus. Also, it is very relevant to students at BYU.
Good titles. My favorite is "A long wait to lose weight." I thought you established your ethos well by relating to the reader- saying that everyone feels this way.
I personally like your first alternative title. That grabs my attention the most. I think that you related it well to us as BYU students but I do think that the paragraph is a bit choppy.
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