Friday, February 22, 2008
Ride the Bus or I Will Beat You Up
Riding the bus is so much much better than driving your own car. First of all, more people ride the bus, so everybody should ride the bus. Second, we rode the bus in high school, so we should ride the bus now. Third, If we don't ride the bus now, then pollution is going to take over Provo, and then we will be this little ball of smoke, and we will not be able to live and we will all die. Fourth, ride the bus is awesome, one time when I was 6 i got stitches because I ran into a table. Fifth, if you don't ride the bus, I am going to beat you up.
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I'm definitely going to ride the bus now that you've threatened me!
False analogy - we rode the bus in high school, so we should ride it now.
I loved the false analogy and the threat! I will ride the bus for sure.
The band wagon appeal was used well here.
The red herring was thrown in there pretty well. What do your reckless childhood habits have to do with me riding the bus…I mean, ok…I’ll do it, just don’t beat me up. Oh it’s like HS all over again.
The title was enough of a threat to me. Nice Job
Nice use of the bandwagon appeal. I liked your topic, it was fun to read.
Sweet, I already ride the bus so you don't need to beat me up. Your threat has no effect on me.
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